The red & black colors are an excellent choice with the models beautiful skin tone! Her lovely face & form look flawless! Her hypnotic stare really tops this one off! I would only change one small thing and that would be to have a black top or no top at all. Believe it or not I mean that mostly in an artistic sense, because this shot is so amazing! I still give it, you and her a 9.99, so go ahead and round it up!
Too much editing done, it's easy to see where all the touch-ups are, almost makes her look flat, non-real. Almost even like it's her head on a different body. Nevertheless beautiful model, just way too much editing post.
I agree it doesn't look very real, but I don't remember doing a huge amount of photoshopping. I think it's caused by the bright colours (which I probably oversaturated as I often do) and the lighting. The model looks doll-like, as though made of plastic. Perhaps the texture of the (real leather) chair affects the way the brain processes the info. Perhaps it's because she has too perfect a figure.
It could easily be due to the over-saturating, the brightness of the chair and the curtain in contrast with her complexion.
But from a photographers point of view, her face looks all most too smooth, which in turn makes her look flat. Also around the stomach area, just below the bra, you can see some signs of shopping. Her eyes are also overly white.
It's a decent shot, just seems a little too touched up for my taste, or too obviously touched up.