Sweet Sixteen

I like the simple but effective composition here. It's nothing earth-shattering but it does the job very well of showing the model's body and the details of her underwear. The light works well to highlight her curves on the one side but other side sinks into the darkness, which works fairly well to give an "early morning" feeling.

But this could do with some adjustments to the brightness, white balance and contrast. The colour palette is grey and lifeless and your eyes just sort of land on different patches of dull light with nothing popping out of the picture. Accentuate the light on her body and make her lingerie actually stand out a bit and you have a much more exciting photo without changing anything significantly. A beautiful woman does not a sexy photo make, necessarily.